OH MY GOD IS THAT A J COLE REFERNECE!?!?!?1/ She knows She knows, ayy Bad things happen to the people you love And you find yourself praying up to heaven above But honestly, I've never had much sympathy 'Cause those bad things, I always saw them coming for me I'm gonna run, run away (Oh, I), run run away, run away (Oh, I-I-I) Run away and never come back (Well, alright) Run run away, run run away (Oh, I), run away (Oh, I-I-I) Show 'em that your color is black (Well, alright)
[Verse 1: J. Cole] Damned if I do, damned if I don't You know I got a girl back home You got a man, what you want, what you want? What these bitches want from a nigga? On some DMX shit, huh I know them other niggas love tricking On some BMX shit, but not me Now I'm sure you done heard about me A black star, Mos Def, Kweli Good so them bad hoes try me, they try me This is Martin Luther King in the club, getting dubs With a bad bitch in his ear, sayin' that she down for whatever In the back of his mind is Coretta [Chorus: J. Cole] And she knows, she knows And I know she knows, and I know she knows And deep down, she knows, she knows And I know she knows, and I know she knows
[Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman] Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright Oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Verse 2: J. Cole] Damned if I do, shit, damned if I don't I'm passing up on bad hoes Trying to be the man that she want, what she want? What she—What she want from a nigga? To put a ring on it Got a bitch on my dick right now And she just want to sing on it Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie Dancehall vibes with my pants on fire 'Cause I told her I was sleep 'Cause I creep with this pretty young thing that I chose She could be doing the same thing, I suppose [Chorus: J. Cole] And she knows, she knows And I know she knows, and I know she knows And deep down, she knows, she knows And I know she knows, and I know she knows
[Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman] Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright Oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Bridge 1: J. Cole] Niggas say, "Turn up," hoes say, "Turn up" Only bad thing 'bout a star is they burn up Niggas say, "Turn up," hoes say, "Turn up" Only bad thing 'bout a star is they burn up Rest in peace to Aaliyah Rest in peace to Left Eye (Left Eye) Michael Jackson, I'll see ya Just as soon as I die (I die)
[Bridge 2: J. Cole] Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie, uh I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie, uh I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie [Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman] Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright Oh, I, oh, I-I-I I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Outro: Amber Coffman (Sampled)] Run away, run away— Back Run away, run away— Back Run away, run away— Back Run away, run away— Back
Kolejne twoje opowiadanie które przeczytałam. Masz potencjał, bardzo dobrze trzymasz w napięciu i dobrze pokazujesz emocje, a szczególnie odczucia Amelie, ale dam ci poradę, jeżeli byś pisała opowiadanie które ma na celu pokazać emocje, to bardziej opisuj odczucia bohaterów w danych momentach😊 (nie musisz się stosować) piękne!!!!!❤️
Och, smutno aż się zrobiło. Zdrada przyjaciela boli bardziej niż zdrada chłopaka, jakby, pakując się w związek zawsze jest jakieśtam ryzyko i świadomość o nim z tyłu głowy, ale przyjaciel to ktoś, komu całym sercem się ufa, zwierza z najbardziej żenujących sekretów, kocha jak rodzinę, ktoś kto był przy nas najczęściej przez dłuższy czas, a potem bez wahania, z premedytacją wbija nóż w plecy, wiedząc, że nas zrani. Mam wrażenie, że główna bohaterka nie przejęła się nawet tym, że straciła chłopaka, tylko tym, że Fleur się tak zachowała. Dobry one shot 🤍
Coffee_Queen
Bardzo fajne, ale koniec wydaję mi się zbyt szczęśliwy…. Ale to tylko mój gust, reszta super!
b...a
Piękne opowiadanie! Kocham opowiadania z dobrym zakończeniem w ogóle!🫶✨️
Dr.Nori
Fajne opowiadanie
I szkodzą że Caroline i Amy nie skończyły razem ;-;
AnnieOaklay
@Patheticyzacja2.0 też myślałam że to będzie zakończenie :'(
JeremiaszCiongutka
OH MY GOD IS THAT A J COLE REFERNECE!?!?!?1/
She knows
She knows, ayy
Bad things happen to the people you love
And you find yourself praying up to heaven above
But honestly, I've never had much sympathy
'Cause those bad things, I always saw them coming for me
I'm gonna run, run away (Oh, I), run run away, run away (Oh, I-I-I)
Run away and never come back (Well, alright)
Run run away, run run away (Oh, I), run away (Oh, I-I-I)
Show 'em that your color is black (Well, alright)
[Verse 1: J. Cole]
Damned if I do, damned if I don't
You know I got a girl back home
You got a man, what you want, what you want?
What these bitches want from a nigga?
On some DMX shit, huh
I know them other niggas love tricking
On some BMX shit, but not me
Now I'm sure you done heard about me
A black star, Mos Def, Kweli
Good so them bad hoes try me, they try me
This is Martin Luther King in the club, getting dubs
With a bad bitch in his ear, sayin' that she down for whatever
In the back of his mind is Coretta
[Chorus: J. Cole]
And she knows, she knows
And I know she knows, and I know she knows
And deep down, she knows, she knows
And I know she knows, and I know she knows
[Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman]
Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
Oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Verse 2: J. Cole]
Damned if I do, shit, damned if I don't
I'm passing up on bad hoes
Trying to be the man that she want, what she want?
What she—What she want from a nigga?
To put a ring on it
Got a bitch on my dick right now
And she just want to sing on it
Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie
I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie
Dancehall vibes with my pants on fire
'Cause I told her I was sleep
'Cause I creep with this pretty young thing that I chose
She could be doing the same thing, I suppose
[Chorus: J. Cole]
And she knows, she knows
And I know she knows, and I know she knows
And deep down, she knows, she knows
And I know she knows, and I know she knows
[Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman]
Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
Oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Bridge 1: J. Cole]
Niggas say, "Turn up," hoes say, "Turn up"
Only bad thing 'bout a star is they burn up
Niggas say, "Turn up," hoes say, "Turn up"
Only bad thing 'bout a star is they burn up
Rest in peace to Aaliyah
Rest in peace to Left Eye (Left Eye)
Michael Jackson, I'll see ya
Just as soon as I die (I die)
[Bridge 2: J. Cole]
Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie, uh
I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie
Got me up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie, uh
I be up so high, try and get a piece of that apple pie
[Refrain: J. Cole with Amber Coffman]
Well, alright, oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
Oh, I, oh, I-I-I
I can't be what you want from me, well, alright
[Outro: Amber Coffman (Sampled)]
Run away, run away— Back
Run away, run away— Back
Run away, run away— Back
Run away, run away— Back
Leocadiee
Kolejne twoje opowiadanie które przeczytałam. Masz potencjał, bardzo dobrze trzymasz w napięciu i dobrze pokazujesz emocje, a szczególnie odczucia Amelie, ale dam ci poradę, jeżeli byś pisała opowiadanie które ma na celu pokazać emocje, to bardziej opisuj odczucia bohaterów w danych momentach😊 (nie musisz się stosować) piękne!!!!!❤️
Leocadiee
@LadyLovegood Ja właśnie teraz zaczynam pisać kolejne opowiadanie, które niedługo opublikuje więc jak będziesz chciała, to mozesz zobaczyc :D
Leosanne
• AUTOR@Litery-to-moje-zycie oczywiście zajżę na twoje konto ;D
Erynia
Fajne, miło się czytało <3
Leosanne
• AUTOR@Erynia 🫶🏻🫡
Caramelo
Och, smutno aż się zrobiło. Zdrada przyjaciela boli bardziej niż zdrada chłopaka, jakby, pakując się w związek zawsze jest jakieśtam ryzyko i świadomość o nim z tyłu głowy, ale przyjaciel to ktoś, komu całym sercem się ufa, zwierza z najbardziej żenujących sekretów, kocha jak rodzinę, ktoś kto był przy nas najczęściej przez dłuższy czas, a potem bez wahania, z premedytacją wbija nóż w plecy, wiedząc, że nas zrani. Mam wrażenie, że główna bohaterka nie przejęła się nawet tym, że straciła chłopaka, tylko tym, że Fleur się tak zachowała.
Dobry one shot 🤍
Leosanne
• AUTOR@Caramelo dzięki. Bardzo się starałam. Tak głównie na tym chciałam by się opierał ten One shot.